NCE4-Lesson16仿写练习

仿写结果

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总结

  • In the organization of industrial life the influence of the factory upon the physiological and mental state of the workers has been completely neglected.

physiological and mental state of the workers 这个表达中的state这个词非常好

  • the conception of the maximum production at lowest cost

最小投入,最大产出的的理念

  • Modern industry is based on the conception of the maximum production at lowest cost, in order that an individual or a group of individuals may earn as much money as possible.

in order that的从句形式,不要提起in order 就是用in order to其实从句的表达效果更加好

  • 不注意,不管不顾的多种表达

without any idea of

without giving any consideration to

with no regard for

  • It has expanded without any idea of the true nature of the human beings who run the machines, and without giving any consideration to the effects produced on the individuals and on their descendants by the artificial mode of existence imposed by the factory.

马克思观点中所谓人的异化就是从这个角度进行论证分析,这里也是非常值得背诵的好句子

  • 表达取决于,决定于

be based on the conception of

depend entirely on the necessity of

  • The shape and dimensions of the skyscrapers depend entirely on the necessity of obtaining the maximum income per square foot of ground, and of offering to the tenants offices and apartments that please them.

背诵,obtaining the maximun income per square foot of ground

  • This caused the construction of gigantic buildings where too large masses of human beings are crowded together.

skycrapers, gigantic buildings edifice, high-rise, landmark, constuction都是表示大楼的词汇

  • The modern city consists of monstrous edifices and of dark, narrow streets full of petrol fumes and toxic gases, torn by the noise of the taxicabs, lorries and buses, and thronged ceaselessly by great crowds.

城市环境糟糕的非常好的句子,替换单词可以重新使用

背诵

In the organization of industrial life the influence of the factory upon the physiological and mental state of the workers has been completely neglected. Modern industry is based on the conception of the maximum production at lowest cost, in order that an individual or a group of individuals may earn as much money as possible. It has expanded without any idea of the true nature of the human beings who run the machines, and without giving any consideration to the effects produced on the individuals and on their descendants by the artificial mode of existence imposed by the factory. The great cities have been built with no regard for us. The shape and dimensions of the skyscrapers depend entirely on the necessity of obtaining the maximum income per square foot of ground, and of offering to the tenants offices and apartments that please them. This caused the construction of gigantic buildings where too large masses of human beings are crowded together. Civilized men like such a way of living. While they enjoy the comfort and banal luxury of their dwelling, they do not realize that they are deprived of the necessities of life. The modern city consists of monstrous edifices and of dark, narrow streets full of petrol fumes and toxic gases, torn by the noise of the taxicabs, lorries and buses, and thronged ceaselessly by great crowds. Obviously, it has not been planned for the good of its inhabitants.</div>

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